Free writing tip: “My first draft is too short!”

Alle C. Hall
2 min readNov 19, 2024

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A reader’s question, and standard lengths for fiction: flash to novel.

BUT FIRST: My multi-award-winning novel, As Far as You Can Go Before You Have to Come Back is now available at Target and Walmart..

Now, on to the reader’s question:

I finally finished a draft but it is too short. How can I fix this? Should I pad it?

Alle sez:

There was an instance when I was privileged to ask The Great Goddess Amy Bloom how she knew if the piece she was working on was a short story or a novel.

She replied that when she stopped having questions about the characters, she was done. And when she was done, it was either a short story or a novel.

Love that. Write what you want to write. Then find publication.

I advise against padding simply to reach a longer word count. When I finish a draft — novel-length to a post, here — it is good to give it some time. For the projects I see as having more of an impact on the life of the reader — say, a novel or essay rather than a Medium post — I let the work sit anywhere from a few days to several years.

(The sit-length is determined by how much I cannot keep the piece out of my head.)

When I re-read with revision in mind, I am most interested in what type of questions emerge. Invariably, those question light the fire I need to drive the project forward.

INDUSTRY STANDARDS FOR LITERARY FICTION

  • Micro 50–500 words
  • Flash: 500–1000 words
  • Short: 750–2500 words
  • Short story: up to 5000 words
  • Novella: 40,000
  • Novel: 50,000–100,000

BY BOOK GENRE

  • Sci fic/fantasy: 90,000 to 120,000 words.
  • Historical: 100,000 words.
  • Romance: 50,000 words (beach reads) to 100,000 (up-market).
  • Thriller: 70,000 and 90,000 words

You are free to write to whatever word length the goddess gifts you. However, it is a challenge to publish work that does not fit easily into the above categories.

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Alle C. Hall
Alle C. Hall

Written by Alle C. Hall

Author, teacher, speaker. Novel: As Far as You Can Go Before You Have to Come Back: 16 honors, incldng Nancy Pearl Book Award finalist & two #1 Kindle spots.

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